I must now go back to the very beginning and read through the entire thing.
I hate when I miss character details, it bothers the Hell out of me xD
And I also think it's interesting how Tabitha is really starting to look around at Gail's place, even as they're packing up.
And of course, looking at Gail is always a bonus for us Tabigail fans.
Tabigail? Or Gabitha... ?_?
See, this is the kind of thing I was talking about earlier, "let's insult the tastes of the superstrong person next to me". Brilliant!
Otherwise, it's good to see Tabitha taking an interest in Gail.
I'm going to assume the scar is that white bit on her side, since scars are generally lighter bits of skin. But it took me a bit to notice it because I was distracted by all those blue lines down the middle of her back. Which I know make a circle around the scar but the ones on her back are so much darker than the rest that they are much more ntoiceable. It doesn't help that there's no top to the circle and the lettering cuts off the bottom.
If you darkened the lines floating over your white back ground to match the ones on her back, it'd be a lot clearer and they'd fulfill their purpose of drawing the eye to the scar rather than distracting from it.
Gosh darn it Tabitha. You see Gail break someone who I'm pretty sure is a serial killer out of prison, be totally cool with Jasper shooting somebody, and basically be Antisocial Personality Disorder all over the place 24/7, but OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOO, she doesn't have much stuff and her furniture looks used! Maybe she had a bad childhood?
Sure she's staring at the scar and only the scar....and not Gail's butt, like I just "might" be. *whistles innocently* And I was SO not looking at Tabi's butt in the previous page. What can I say, they both have nice... assests. Tabi's a total cutie, I would say more curvasious then chubby. Curvy women are sexy.