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amiko_16, June 17th, 2007, 11:35 pm


Amber finally gets pissed enough to retaliate XD;

Oops, sorry for the late-night update @__@;;
2-pages for Sunday... tho technically it's..Monday... >>;; *slinks off*

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RE: Kiye... XD

RE: Flaminbuns... lol thanks, I had to kind of wing it with the hands @_@;

RE: Avengeli... thank you~ <3

RE: black_widow1417... lol hey dork XD

RE: Ness... ^.^

RE: Mangaluver... >XD;;

RE: Sassyfrass... AHAHAHA XD;;

RE: Pandachu... >XDD




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Flaminbuns, June 18th, 2007, 2:55 am


Ooooh. She's piss! I wonder who's going to win. xD ^^ VERY INTERESTIN!


Mangaluver, June 18th, 2007, 8:59 am


thats gotta hurt...*owies* dont let gail loose!!*sniffles* she is my fav villain...

edit: to: flaminbuns
i really dont think she is piss... maybe pissed is right, but "piss" is really wrong XDD


Croon, June 18th, 2007, 9:52 am


o: <<<<!!!
*BISH-SLAPS AMBER*

I want Gaaaaaail to wiiiiiiin~!!!
ToT;;;;;;


Ness, June 18th, 2007, 3:40 pm


Okay, I know this is bad, but, LOL GAIL GOT PWN'D.


Avengeli, June 18th, 2007, 8:13 pm


GAIL DON'T LET HER FLY AWAAAAAY! Grab her hair again >:D and PUUULLLLLL~!!! xDD


Jude K.A. Boi, June 19th, 2007, 3:41 pm


CAT FIGHT!!!!

I am so sorry... it felt necessary...


miquashi, June 19th, 2007, 8:51 pm


*sighs* I bet if you surrounded her feet in cemement and threw her in a river she wouldn't fly..uh..........yeah.........


LadyBow, June 20th, 2007, 8:08 pm


Hey. :3
I found your comic in an ad and just ended up reading through the whole thing. XD

I just wanted to say that it's turning out great, and it's actually pretty original compared to most stuff I see on smackjeeves. Gail is actually an interesting character. Usually the villian is just an embodyment of "evil" with little personality or a background. You also have a unique depiction of the "magical girl" protagonist, which has always just been seen as this perfect little angel. You're gonna think this is hilarious, but Amber reminds me of Kagome. Maybe it's because she has the same hairdo, and you have a similar drawing style as Rumiko's. Which I guess is why it's fun to see her picked on. XD But at the same time I feel pitty for her, which is rare for me.

There's realism, the dialogue is natural and witty... I liked how the cat was asking about where its balls went and how Gail refered to herself as Dr. Doolittle. xD

As for a little advice, you have good faces, but disproportionate and usually stiff bodies. It's nothing that can't be fixed with a study-up on anatomy with some of those "how to draw manga" books or simply by observing others. And judging by up-turned sidewalks during the earlier scenes, you also should check out how to draw perspective. It'll really help with your backgrounds and make the characters look like they're more part of their surroundings. It's actually very easy to learn but makes a real difference.

Anyway, sorry for rambling! I'll add this to my favorites now. XD


Sassyfrass, June 21st, 2007, 2:07 pm

AMBERRRR!!! >=(
*holds up ice pack*
NUUU, you can't hurt the sexy!!!
The good gal has no personality. XD *clings to gail's leg*


E.Redemption, June 23rd, 2007, 1:50 pm


I like your action scenes X) lol "I can fly, bitch", someone was too caught up in the moment ^^


constant_boredom, December 5th, 2009, 12:14 am


aww crap here comes the "hero's first victory" again :( C'mon Gail!!!!!


QwertySapphire, March 4th, 2010, 10:17 pm


Thems are some pretty epic last words xD <3 your comic :3


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