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amiko_16, March 1st, 2009, 12:25 pm


Pfff
There are parts of this page I like, and other parts I don't. That'll teach me not to draw a page first thing in the morning >_>;

New fanart by Laine Valentine up on the etc page~! <3




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Tuume (Guest), March 1st, 2009, 2:24 pm


That guy with the dreads is a badass threat, huh? Nice work on the page. Hope Jasper doesn't kill Tabitha...


Kikirini, March 1st, 2009, 2:41 pm


Yeah, some parts of the page look a little rough. Ah well, we all have bad days...err bad parts of the day...

"And he needs to see Jasper does what he's told."

Do you mean "do" instead of "does?"


Deglorath, March 2nd, 2009, 1:40 am


Well, first, RE: Kikirini - Actually "And he needs to see Jasper does what he's told." would be a proper way to put it. Though the other way would work though have a slightly different meaning.. But anyways, they're both correct, just depends on what Amiko was looking for...

It looks mostly good to me, Gail does get a little Stretch Armstrong in panel one, but I'm always very glad to see an update anyways. :D


thatanonguy (Guest), March 2nd, 2009, 12:48 pm


Actuly, you've just made me realise, in the first panel she's topless!


Kaja Rainbow, March 3rd, 2009, 9:15 pm


Nice. The sign language's recognizable. (Hi! Deaf person here.)


magicmumu, March 6th, 2009, 8:32 pm


I liked that you had the sign language, but I think that Gail would have heard the thought of what the sign language means. Someone usually has to think it to sign it. Don't they? And I liked the second to last panel. The african american chick (I forget her name ) looks really pretty there.

Erin


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